We are a class of year 3 and 4 children at Vardon School in Hamilton. The purpose of this blog is to share what we are learning with others. Click into our individual blogs to see samples of our work and reflections of what we did well and what we can improve on.
Fantastic Manaia. It is always important to start each story in an interesting way because the reader will decide very quickly if they think it will be an exciting imaginative story filled with adjectives or a boring story that they don't even read the end of. Perhaps you could post the first sentence of your story up here for everyone to see. Mrs Head
Fantastic Manaia. It is always important to start each story in an interesting way because the reader will decide very quickly if they think it will be an exciting imaginative story filled with adjectives or a boring story that they don't even read the end of. Perhaps you could post the first sentence of your story up here for everyone to see.
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