My weekend was awesome because I went to Rainbows End and I went on the roller coster and the goldrush. The goldrush was scary because on the way we went into a tunnel and there was skeltons on the wall. On the log flume there were frogs jumping over us and bats and little men. It was my first time at Rainbows End and I want to go back when I am 10 because then I am older and can go on the roller coaster and won't cry at the end.
This is a great start to what could be used for your weekend recount that we started after you wrote this Ashton. Look back on your writing and see which parts you included in your writing. I would love to see your interesting title and start to your story posted on the blog.
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Thank you very much Mrs Head for putting a comment on my blog.
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