WALT: Describe a setting for a narrative story.
Thinking about who might live here and what its surroundings might be like.
Thinking about who might live here and what its surroundings might be like.
This house has a large pole that looks like a tree trunk that has grown out of the ground with a regular looking letterbox house perched on top. A rich man owns the house because the house is customised with lots of rooms. The rich man is a very tall man who needed a big house to fit inside. He lives on a farm with fences that look like spiderwebs next to the huge house. The house reaches up towards the clouds like a rocket pointing to space.
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A great piece of writing Room 11. I love the way you have used similes to describe the house- pointing up like a rocket to the sky- it makes your writing exciting and very interesting to read. I am going to get my class to read your dsecriptions to help them with their narrative writing.
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