Tuesday, September 4, 2012

Writing about a setting

WALT: Describe a setting for a narrative story.
Thinking about who might live here and what its surroundings might be like.


This house has a large pole that looks like a tree trunk that has grown out of the ground with a regular looking letterbox house perched on top. A rich man owns the house because the house is customised with lots of rooms. The rich man is a very tall man who needed a big house to fit inside. He lives on a farm with fences that look like spiderwebs next to the huge house. The house reaches up towards the clouds like a rocket pointing to space.

THIS IS OUR DRAFT PIECE OF WRITING THAT WE HAVE QUICKLY COME UP WITH AS A CLASS. PLEASE CHECK OUT OUR INDIVIDUAL BLOGS FOR A SIMILAR EXAMPLE OF OUR WRITING.


1 comment:

  1. A great piece of writing Room 11. I love the way you have used similes to describe the house- pointing up like a rocket to the sky- it makes your writing exciting and very interesting to read. I am going to get my class to read your dsecriptions to help them with their narrative writing.

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