Writing- Describing characters

WALT:  Describe characters for a narrative.
Think about what they look like, what they are wearing, who their friends are, what they do.

These boys have been stuck in the woods for six years. They live in the forest and are extremely poor, they have no money and no food so they have to kill animals with their bow and arrows. Then toast the meat on the fire to eat with fire made from sparking stones and bamboo rubbed together. They sharpen sticks to peel the skin of the animals bodies and cut the animals up to cook over the fire.

The boys use bamboo cut in half to make little bowls and giant leaves for plates to eat from.

They build treehouses out of sticks, bamboo and leaves with secret tunnels and trap doors made from the tree trunk hollowed out. They have secret hide-outs with slides to kept themselves safe from all the animals that are angry the boys have killed their friends to eat and make mats from the animal skin and destroy their forest to make their own treehouses.

They use bamboo to make tubes and use the teeth from the animals and rope to tie the teeth onto the bamboo to use for their arrows. Their guns are made from bamboo filled with animal teeth and when they blow, the teeth attack firing out of the bamboo.

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