Survivor Challenge-Writing

This week our challenge was a writing one. We had to work as a team to come up with a creative piece of writing. We were given five minutes to plan our story and then just 15 minutes to write it. The catch was it had to include three objects somewhere in the story. These objects were; an umbrella, scarf and a hot dog.
At first we thought how are we going to put all of these three things into one story but quickly we found a way and here are our stories.

Mighty Eagles
One day one big hairy faced man named Mr Twit who always gets hot dogs and his wife Mrs Twit who always gets new umbrellas and their rabbit called Ella who always wears a scarf ate bird pie. A cow girl called Eva always goes around town in her cowgirl boots or heelies and her horse goes clip clop clip clip in his fancy hooves. Oh by the way his name is Rico. His hooves are so annoying that people say get out of town you fancy horse.

Golden Bell Tui's
Mr and Mrs Twit head off to the beach while holding an umbrella and scarf. Look Mr Twit there is a delicious hot dog truck. Should we get some delicious hot dogs? Yes gasped Mr Twit so they put down their scarf and umbrella and ran off to the hot dog truck which was really far away and the first time the Twit's had ever run.

Green Pythons
Once upon a time there was a boy called Alex and his big step brother named Jayden. One day they went to buy a scarf and a hot dog. But after a few seconds it started raining. Then they started thinking out the box it was midnight they ran to the umbrella shop.

Lightening Strikes
One day there was an old lady who walked past a hot dog shop while it was raining with her umbrella and her scarf on her neck because it was snowing. Her dog was called hot dog and she was the poshest dog in the entire world. Like totally! She went back into the hot dog shop and there was just one left so she dived for it but someone else just got it.

What do you like about our stories? How would you have used the three objects in a story?